Sunday, July 17, 2016
Elevator Pitch No. 3
1. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8gHcQHVfIng&feature=youtu.be
2. When I opened my previous pitch to see my new feedback, I was so surprised! I got such good feedback regarding my eye contact and enthusiasm along with appealing to my listeners emotions. The most important I received was how I got my point across in such a concise amount of time which I believe was the goal, so mission accomplished!! Nothing was silly, every comment was taken seriously and provided me with confidence as I post this one.
3. Because of my positive feedback, I was able to keep my pitch overall the same! I made just to maintain eye contact the whole time and keep using expressions and hand gestures to show my passion for the company. I changed the wording of a few sentences, but other than that I maintained the same structure as the previous one.
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Jayme,
ReplyDeleteI really like your concept and your pitch. You display confidence and you are helping people of unfortunate circumstances. I love how you mentioned what New York is doing with taxi cabs as it is a direct correlation to your concept. The only improvement to be made would be to mention estimated figures as to know how much capital would be needed initially.
Jayme,
ReplyDeleteI must say that you did maintain contact provided thoughtful information about your concept, while displaying an obvious confidence about the need to fix this problem. Also, I like how you provided how other major cities are taking action to help individuals in these circumstances, which only strengths your concept in needing to become a reality.
Hello Jayme, I was happy to hear that you took the good feedback and didn't run away with it. Although it may seem that it doesn't help, having any kind of feedback will help you in the long run, and I was glad to see that you really did take it to heart, and made every aspect you could better.
ReplyDeleteHi Jayme,
ReplyDeleteI think you did great in using the feedback given to you. You were able to provide more information on other cities and how to take action. I love your confidence, it's something I definitely need to emulate. I think if you were to add more numbers it would be even better. Great job overall.
Great job! You are very well-spoken and have a clear idea of what you want to accomplish. I think you could add more details since your pitch was a little short. A short anecdote would be nice to show there is a personal connection between you and your idea.
ReplyDeleteHey Jayme,
ReplyDeleteI think your concept is awesome. I’m honestly surprised that this is something that doesn’t already exist as there is definitely a need for it. I liked that you backed your concept with facts about why it will be successful. You did a great job at maintaining eye contact, you spoke clearly, and you got your point across concisely. Great job!
Hey Jayme,
ReplyDeleteI have always enjoyed your concept watching your pitch made it so much better! I think you were great you spoke clear and caught my attention the whole time. I think that any idea that is a selles act of kindess will always succeed so keep up the good work!
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